joi, 30 martie 2017

Carribean Kigo Kukai -114


RESULTS OF THE 2017 ANNIVERSARY KUKAI

1
monastic retreat - 
reminding of my touchscreen
the lake's surface 
--Ana Drobot, Bucharest, Romania
VOTES: *1**** SCORE: 02
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2
seven-star comfort-
from the fir bough shelter
looking at Ursa Major
--Dan Iulian, Bucharest-Romania
VOTES: 11**** SCORE: 03
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5
early dusk
I trace the lip
of the jar
--Stella Pierides 
VOTES: 42**** SCORE: 08
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6
Sounding the retreat
bitter tears flowing from
the trompeter's eyes
-- Vasile Moldovan, Romania
VOTES: **1*** SCORE: 03
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