sâmbătă, 29 august 2015

The Shiki Monthly Kukai, August 2015 Results



Kigo Theme: STARLIT NIGHT

night, forever...
the boy holding
a tinfoil star

Lavana Kray
Romania
(0,1,0) = 2 pts
  
starlit night -
the bouquet from you
fading away

Ana Drobot
Bucharest, Romania
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

reminding the childhood –
in the starlit night
only a cricket

Miorita
(0,0,1) = 1 pts

Starlit night –
the cricket song rising
to the heavenly vault

Virginia Popescu 
PHOENIX

Free Format Theme: PATH
longing... 
above the path
Orion
 
Ana Drobot
Bucharest, Romania
(0,1,3) = 5 pts
**So few words; so much meaning!
**Ah, that longing we all experience and as the expression goes: longing for the stars. And there above the path is Orion (visible throughout the world) – the hunter – trying to find what is being longed after, in this case perhaps love, but it could be anything, physical, emotional, intellectual.
 
the path getting darker
until it split into two byroads:
mine and yours

Lavana Kray - Romania
(0,0,1) = 1 pts

“Love’s labour’s lost” -
a narrow path among
old memories

Virginia Popescu 
PHOENIX
(0,0,1) = 1 pts


dragging suitcases-
my childhood's secret path
only summer weeds...

Cristian Mocanu
(0,0,1) = 1 pts
  
sun in the clouds –
in the middle of the path
a chicory

Miorita

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