sâmbătă, 28 septembrie 2013

SHIKI MONTHLY KUKAI SEPT.2013

Kigo Theme: 
MILKY WAY/RIVER OF HEAVEN
 
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Milky Way –
a sleeping baby
at mother’s breast
 
Virginia Popescu 
PHOENIX
(1,2,4) = 11 pts
 
Traveling
just on the Milky Way
with the Great Bear
 
Constantin Stroe
(1,2,1) = 8 pts
 
river of heaven...
tiptoeing
between reeds
 
Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu
(0,1,6) = 8 pts
 
rowing on the sea-
before my eyes and behind me
the shine of Milky Way 
 
Vasile Moldovan
(1,0,0) = 3 pts
 
 no milk in breasts ...
the lying-in woman stares 
at the Milky Way
 
Gaby RC
(0,1,1) = 3 pts
 
starry night
we share a blanket and
a Milky Way chocolate
 
Steliana Cristina
Voicu, Ploiesti, Romania
(0,0,3) = 3 pts
 
Milky Way
on the pond -
thirsty deer
 
Lavana Kray
Iasi-Romania
(0,0,3) = 3 pts
 
the mourn silence
nestling among the reeds
in the Milky Way 
 
Oprica PADEANU
(0,1,0) = 2 pts
 
making plans –
a late boat drifting
on the Milky Way
 
Eduard TARA
(0,0,2) = 2 pts
 
I taste tea
watching to the Milky Way –
a shooting star
 
Miorita
(0,0,1) = 1 pts
 
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River of Heaven -
fish, birds and UE peoples
Danube river
 
STOPS
  
baby breastfeeding -
stardust from the Milky Way
dwindles away
 
Daniela Bullas
 
 
Milky Way -
city lights
blurring off at dawn
 
Petru-Ioan Garda
 
 
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Free Format Theme: 
ORANGE(S)/TANGERINE(S)
 
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Second Place -  18 Points
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ripe orchard -
my hand meets yours
on the same orange...
 
Lavana Kray
Iasi-Romania
(2,3,6) = 18 pts
 
 Steliana Cristina Voicu
Ploiesti, Romania
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 Hypermarket -
tangerines, tomatoes, plasticine,
same taste
 
Petru-Ioan Garda
(0,0,2) = 2 pts
 
saffron lilies
the squeaking
of my letterbox
 
Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu
(0,0,1) = 1 pts
 
end of moonset –
the skin of an orange
on the windowsill
 
Eduard TARA
(0,0,1) = 1 pts
 
only an orange
and how many children...
it is snowing
 
Miorita
(0,0,1) = 1 pts
 
still life with oranges –
so lively
under the moonlight
 
Virginia Popescu 
PHOENIX
 
 
 

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